Hello 🌖 HuntersMoon ,

As a co-participant in "I Write in 2019" , it is my pleasure to review your contest entry.


You're killing me, Ken! Killing me dead as a doornail!

I loved this poem and the wonderfully cheery picture you painted with each perfectly formed quatrain. As I was reading, I thought this is such a great poem to share with my granddaughters. The older one loves rhyming poetry!
Then I got to the last sentence and spit coffee on the computer monitor as it gurgled out of my nose.

Of course, I will still share it with the girls as they can also appreciate a good pun.

Well done, Ken!!

Kindest Regards, Lilli

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .