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WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  (E) Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of eight Quills! #1300305 by Maryann

Hello, Detective !! I posted after you in I Write 2019, so here is my review.

I LOVE that the weather is finally getting warmer, and winter is finally starting to go away. This poem is a fun read. I would love to see what the prompt for The Writer's Cramp was for this. Maybe you could add an "author's note" at the bottom. Using the dropnote feature keeps it looking clean and neat.

I also noticed a typo here:

"The slippery slush has lost its' power" You don't need an apostrophe on its.

Your poem flows well and has an easy rhyme scheme. Nice job, and good luck in the contest!

IceSkating SugarCube



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .