Hi FalsePoet,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of fear and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone fearing death at the hands of a demon when they encounter a stranger in the night. The reader is wondering if the person in the poem is really in danger. They will read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.