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The Night the Bears Roamed Open in new Window. [E]
Family vacation my brother & I brought friends to our mountain cabin. Homesickness struck.
by Tinker Author Icon
Review by QPdoll Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please know that the following are simply my thoughts and opinions. Only you can decide what's best for your story. Take what you can use and forget the rest.

Hello, Tinker Author Icon.

I have read "The Night the Bears Roamed" Open in new Window. and would like to share my thoughts.

I'm reviewing this for I Write 2019.


Overall Impression
I liked the idea that Dad was outside protecting the rest of them inside the cabin. It is hard when you become homesick. Everything is a big deal. It's hard to move past that feeling.


My Favorite Part
My favorite part was Mom inside comforting the children in a much different way than Dad was. Together I would have felt comfortable myself. Psalm 23 is always a great reminder of who is in control.


Final Thoughts
This is a beautiful poem. I really like the message it carries. Good luck in the contest.


Keep Writing!

~QPdoll
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