24 Syllables Poetry [13+] Entries for the 24 syllables poetry contest |
Hi IceSkatingSugarCube My name is, Ken, and by virtue of your having posted ahead of me in "I Write in 2019" you're about to find out why folks shudder when they see my handle in a review.😁 It is my pleasure to both read and provide you feedback on your work "Blood Moon" . ✨ First Impression/Thoughts: How apropos! The Blood Moon prophecy claims the world’s fiery demise will be preceded by a menacing omen in the skies. Doom-mongers and online conspiracists believe this will happen of January 21, 2019. 😱 Personally, I wouldn't max out my credit cards just yet... 🤣 I think you captured the essence of this prediction succinctly and with probably more seriousness than it deserves. Still, well done! ✨ Overall Rating/Final Thoughts: A very timely read. Thank you for sharing your journey of imagination, and talent with me today. Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more. 🤗 Keep 'em coming! Ken My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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