Hi, runoffscribe

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of your friends in WdC wonderland.
I had the time again to visit your portfolio and hooked on this piece of yours.


Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others perspective also. Take it if you like and drop if you don't like.

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

Below are the elements of an article that I reflected most while reading this piece of yours. Please pick if you like and just disregard it if you don't like. I hope you will find my humble review to be useful to you and will encourage you more to write.

TITLE:
The title is good, it gives a mystery impression, especially the relationship of those three words. It reminds me of an adventure or an action because most of the stated words are tools of a hunter. Right?

AUDIENCE:
The Intro Rated is for everybody which means this can be appropriate to anyone, children, teen, young adult, and adult. But I can say the voice that you used is not for children. When a child will read this I'm sure he/she will ask more about it.
As to language that was used, being an ESL(English Second Language) I can understand the simple meanings on it, but I can say I am already off to its figurative sense already. That is where I can say that you limit the range of understanding of your audience for this article.

LENGTH:
The length is just fine and it holds well the ideas of the article.

IDEAS/SUBJECT/THEME:
The body of the writings contains different ideas that create a comparison of some creative stuff especially writings and each one creation have its own good sense and uniqueness.

GENRE:
This part creates a confusement to the reader, especially it is not indicated.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:
My only suggestion is to pick and choose the right genre on it, it may also easy to get access when a reader will search a certain genre to find this writing of yours.

Thank you for this awesome piece of yours.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING!