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 Sugar -- A Tale of the Runoffs(0) Open in new Window. [18+]
Prologue: Meric -- Another Day, Another Cop
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Review by SPACE COBWEBS Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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That was a remarkably speedy read! I enjoyed it, particularly the way you develop the setting, plus the character development. Meric wasn't anywhere near as smart-mouthed as I feared he would be. You penned a delightful line in "I think passive aggression and opaque rage are pointless.” I think I need to adopt that as a Lesson for myself. *Smile*

If there are no addresses on Broken Heart Street (what city planner in their right mind would name a street that?), then how does anyone find anything or anyone? I'm thinking of emergency responders and such, as well as visitors. Intriguing. Enquiring minds wish to know..

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