Hi PureSciFi ! I'm here to read and review your item about your SuperPower Reviewers Super Power in celebration of your anniversary month! Congratulations!

Well, I think some "Thanks!" are order! It was you who allowed our mighty Power Ship to crash on Planitia instead of blowing up in space! Thank you, thank you! Without you, my cryo-sleep would never have been broken and we would have all been floating forever in space! Hurray! Chocolate for you!

I suppose I should introduce myself - Galactic Guardian of Growth, Emily, here. (click the image below) It is a fine and mighty honor to meet you today, Sir SpaceAvenger. Again, my humblest gratitude to you for aiding in the safe landing of our Power Ship on Planet Planitia. I was a captain on the Power Ship back in 2012 and 2013 before Lornda and Mona put me in a state of hibernation to allow my human body to go on hiatus in the "real world." Upon my return, what do I find? But our mighty Power Ship downed on an alien planet!

Again, it is with deep satisfaction that I was able to read this history of your heroic actions to preserve the lives of the many reviewers on our Power Ship, and again, thank you. The only suggestions I have for you are with regards to punctuation. I have pasted your words below in red and added s ()where I thought a comma should be:

When we hit that asteroid belt I tried to save our spaceship,

Now that we are here on Planitia my powers have increased.

Now that my powers are almost completely back I’m about ready to return to that asteroid belt

Best of luck on your journey and may the stars be with you! Take care,
Emily

You responded to this review 09/04/2018 @ 11:59pm EDT

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