Hi Doctored Climber ! I'm in your port today to read and review your piece, "Climb (Revised)" in celebration of your Account Anniversary Month! Congratulations!

Before I get into the poem itself, I wanted to make mention of your portfolio in general. When I first stumbled across your handle on the Account Anniversary page and clicked into your portfolio, I was overwhelmed by how many items you have! Wowza! You certainly are a prolific writer! I'd love to browse around your portfolio some more, but it would be a lot easier to find things to read if you organized your items into folders based on type. For example, if you have Essays, Short Stories, and Poems in your port, you could have a folder for each. Or, if you have mostly poetry in your port, you could have folders for different categories, such as poems about Climbing, Emotional poems, Humorous poems, etc. I currently don't have very many items in my port, but you can check out how I have mine organized for an idea. I think getting your items organized into folders would be a good way to help potential readers find something they want to read

Now, on to the review! I know this poem is short, but I still found it very powerful. I don't have any experience in climbing, but I do have experience in life, and in that way, this poem spoke to me. One does not have to participate in the sport of climbing to have an appreciation for the emotion in this poem. Especially the lines: "Feel your balance, your center / Hold on, enjoy the process, the movement / Feel it / Focus on the next hold…" I really connected to the message in this piece. The message to keep moving forward, and keep moving upward. Thank you for writing it!

Thank you for your writing, and thank you for your service as well.

Take care,
Emily

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