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The title of this poem drew me in, I like the word 'Harbinger'. The cover for this poem is very pretty too. As a kid, I used to look forward to the crocus blooming in the spring. They were planted in a circle around the tree in our front yard.
You executed the Diamante form well, and the imagery is very good. This little gem was a pleasure to read.
I could find no errors and I have no suggestions.
Thank you for sharing this with the WDC Community!
Karen
You responded to this review 08/02/2018 @ 11:28pm EDT
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