Hello Jackie Snax! I see you have an anniversary coming up- Happy anniversary! I hope you are enjoying WDC as much as I have over the years. I wanted to share my thoughts about this poem with you, so I hope you don't mind. I have some personal experience with mental illnesses and I admit, you hit the mark- I've had some of these same thoughts myself. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors, but I wonder if this is more prose than poetry? (I haven't figured out the difference yet lol) But I love the way you've broken up the stanzas, it all reads smoothly from one section to the next. My favorite line- craziness is survived by the rich and owned by the poor will echo in my memory for awhile. Thank you for sharing this piece with us, I look forward to reading more of your work!




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .