Hello there! I see you are coming up on an account anniversary! I hope you enjoy WDC as much as I do. I wanted to share my thoughts about this short story with you. I noticed a few capitalization issues sprinkled here and there, but those are easily fixed. Wow. You have an amazing way of describing something we've all thought about at one time or another. It's almost a comfort, the way you described her life memories washing over her like the water. My favorite line- Loneliness concealed in a dense fog will remain in memory for a long time. Thank you for sharing this piece with us, and I look forward to reading more of your work!




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .