Hello again! I came across your poem in the "Noticing Newbies" section. I enjoyed it and hope you don't mind me sharing me opinion. Please remember, I'm not a professional, I'm just a poetry lover.

I picked this poem because of the description. I don't think I've come across a co-op poem recently. I have to say I'm quite impressed with how it turned out, especially considering your ages at the time. What wonderful similes and metaphors! I may even borrow this co-op idea for my own students! The two of you worked well together to create a smooth flowing poem. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors either. Keep up the good work!



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