Hello there! I came across this poem while looking through the account anniversaries. I hope you have enjoyed the past couple of years here on WDC. I picked this poem because of the description under the title. It just drew me in for more. I have to say upfront that I'm not a professional, I just enjoy sharing my opinions. I think the alternate end rhymes read well. You've painted a lovely picture while bringing out a sense of hope. This would be an excellent daily mantra for many to read. (Especially for me, I'm not a morning person!) I didn't see any errors. I like how you capitalized the beginning of each line. It's kind of symbolic, stressing the importance of each line of the stanzas. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, I can't wait to dive further into your portfolio!



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .