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A YaHOO ReMOO from HOOves!!!

*Cow**Balloons*



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am doing the activity for MHWA # 7 where we review members of the group. It is always a pleasure to read your work.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Just about everyone can identify with the terrors of the night that hold us captive for most of our lives. We do not know the answers, but we know we are frightened. Your wonderful poem helps me to not feel so alone in whatever this adventure truly is.

The title is excellent and creative and the description tells the reader where we are going to go. I have often wondered if this sort of thing truly is a premonition that cannot be harnessed.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is my favorite part:

"If I could
I would remember
upon waking
instead of
gasping and shaking
at the unknown
which plagues me
every time I close
my eyes."

I think we all long for some sort of control over those night terrors. The irony is that if we achieve that control where are we then? What new thing lurks in the dark.

Very powerful and gripping poem - well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

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