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Hi lucifer very very very 1st , I found your writing in the psychology genre. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirit.

On Title/Subject
Intriguing title and sub-line that covered its content. I was eager to read on.

General impressions
What a great poem this is. I loved it. It's repetition, it's tempo, it's rhythm. It reminded me of the wonderful poetry of Gertrude Stein.

Favorite Parts
a winless win is a winless losing
a winless win is a winless showcasing
a tie is a conquer of a tie
a tie is a conquer of a winless tie
a tie is a conquer of a conquering tie
conquering is conquering a,
conquering tie

What beauty, it left me speechless.

Suggestions
Although it's just a detail: I would like you to put a space after the comma use in : time is to conquer,time is winless,time is showcasing. It's distracting.

Final thoughts
A philosophical poem with great meaning and rhythm. I loved reading it out loud. Thanks for sharing.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive