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Given: Feb 2, 2018 at 5:30am
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Hello Nikola,
I am here to review your poem as part of the "Invalid Item" .
I chose your poem because the title got my attention and with the mention of 'bipolar' in the intro, I felt this would be something I could relate to.
I liked the phrase you used to describe the racing thoughts: Racing thoughts play bumper cars in my head.. That is a good description; there are days the racing thoughts give the illusion of a NASCAR race, but there are those days that the thoughts just mindlessly crash into each other.
You did a good job capturing some of the high and lows, your poem is accurate and relatable.
Please feel free to join us at "Invalid Item" . We are a friendly, supportive group, and we enjoy sharing laughs too.
Thank you for sharing this poem with us and please, keep writing!
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