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 So run stubborn boy Open in new Window. [13+]
This is a poem written for a Story Poem contest. It tells of a poor soul's warning.
by Mariella Stift Author Icon
Review by Angus Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello, Mariella!
I’ve only recently heard of these poem/stories, but this actually the first one I’ve read. And as a lover of horror and dark things, I thought it was pretty good.
At first I thought you were just going to tell me what this monster was going to do and warn me away, but you took it one step further by describing her. Some of those images, like the rotting teeth where the eyes should be, were pretty vivid!
On a side note, I was going to comment about not having any punctuation, but considering the style of this I don’t think it’s supposed to have any.
Nice job, Mariella!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and congratulations on being a WdC Angel Army Spotlight Reviewer!

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