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The Beast Open in new Window. [ASR]
Will the beast get Samantha? Entered in a contest where you can only use dialogue.
by Write-fully Loti Author Icon
Review of The Beast  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Bon jour again, Loti!
As a lover of horror, I thought this was good. I like how you built up the suspense, at least until that end. I did not see that coming, and apparently, Samantha didn't either. I just wonder what's going to happen to Jimmy and Peter when she wakes up! *Laugh*
The spelling and grammar were flawless, and it's very deserving of that ribbon!
That little bit of humor you added to it was a nice touch, too. I love a little jocundity mixed in with horror.
“Your uncle? Is he here?”
“No, silly. The beast.”
*Laugh*
Great job, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Loti! 'Twas a pleasure to read, and have a wonderful evening/morning/tomorrow!

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