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 Oreo's Backyard Adventure Open in new Window. [E]
This is one of my many short stories I hope you like it!!!!!
by Kate Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, Kate!
For an introductory piece, this isn't bad. It's about as short as it can get though, but that doesn't necessarily take anything away from it. It feels like a short children's story, and I like the friendly atmosphere you gave to it in spite of what could have happened.
The spelling and grammar were excellent, which makes me wonder how old you are. As I said, it feel likes a children's story, or possibly even a story a child would write. Regardless, it's a nice 'feel good' piece.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Kate, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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