Hello Shaara



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Great imagery. I can see a dark forest with the night time critters scampering around. The mushroom grows and dances under the light of the moon.

The rhythm glides along at a good pace. And each line flows nicely into the next line. The title is what pulled me in to read your poem. I feel it lives up to my expectations.

I like how you added a child and witch mother.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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