Hello Connieann



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

The title is good. It fits the story, and lived up to my expectations of the story. It pulls the reader in.

Good start to the story, starting with action and already in mid problems. Great description of setting. I could see the story unfold as I read. Great job at adding in character description. It gives me an idea about the girls, but leaves out enough for me add in my own details.

The plot moves at a great pace. You captured my attention from the beginning and held my in till the end. I was a little disappointed that the girls slept through the storm.
I have no other suggestions to offer.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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