Hello Write-fully Loti



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I love butterflies. So when I found a poem titled Butterflies, I had to stop and read.

There is good rhythm with a steady pace. And each line flows nicely into the next line, making it easy to understand. Good imagery. I can see a green meadow with colorful butterflies. The sun sparkling off there tiny wings.

This piece is well written. Nice word selection and punctuation. I like the theme of the poem. As well as the last line. That butterflies find the light, peace, and love that most people will never fine.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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