Hello Mariella



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I like the story line behind the poem, quit spooky. There is good rhythm to the poem. It moves at a good pace. Each line flows into the next line nicely. Good imagery, I could see the story unfold.

The title fits the poem. It catches the reader attention. Capitalize the first letter of each word in the title.

Suggestions
You use the word "and" quite a bit. Maybe you can replace a few with commas. Besides punctuation helps the flow of the poem.

Maybe spell out 20 instead of using the number. I think it flow more smoothly.




Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading So Run Stubborn Boy
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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