Hello Happy 2018



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I like the form you used. It has a good rhythm to it for being short. And each line flows nicely into the next line. It doesn't feel forced.

The title pulled me in while looking through your port. Both the title and tag line work well together. They fit with this poem.

Good job at writing in emotions. I feel a hint of sadness that turns to joy. I like the poem as a whole, I can not say I like one stanza better.

My only suggestion would be to make the poem longer if possible.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Dream Weavers.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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