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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A well written poem. The rhythm has a short easy flowing movement. Each line flows nicely into the next line. There is plenty of imagery, I can visualize a cozy spot in the woods, birds singing with a breeze blowing through the branches of the trees.

The title works for this piece in a way. However, it doesn't reach out and grab the reader. I picked this poem because it is listed under nature. A suggestion would be to change the title to Natures Tranquility. Please remember you are the creator, not me.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann *ButterflyV*

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