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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello, WPW (Andrew?)!
This isn't bad, but I was a little confused when I first read it; I'm glad you put that disclaimer on it at the end.
It does make a lot of sense to a child, and even if they don't understand some of it (like that part about the puddle being them, as in a reflection of themselves), then you've explained it to them. You also did a good job of keeping the words simple and fun.
Overall, nice job.
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