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 Mr lefty and Mr righty Open in new Window. [13+]
Daily Flash Fiction - 2nd of January 2018 (music, scream, light)
by Sebastian Author Icon
Review by Angus Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Greetings, Sebastian!
This isn't bad. I like the sci/fi aspect you gave to the prompt words (which you used quite well by the way), and the idea of the Razorclaw-gargantuan was very original. You seem to have a knack for short sci/fi, so far as I can tell by this.
Great spelling and grammar, but I did spot a couple of tiny niggles:
'...gotten the coordinates too his captors hideout...' (to)
'There is was.' (it)
Otherwise, nice job.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Sebastian, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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