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| (5.0)| Howdy, Jeff, and again, happy belated birthday! I love horror, and you did a great job with this. At first I thought it was just going to be another of those ‘fountain of youth’ stories with a dull twist on it, but it was anything but that! I often wonder who in their right mind would wish for immortality. Isn’t that at least one of the curses of vampires? Watching all their friends and everybody else around them die? But I digress. Sorry. I love how you took us along on this adventure into the bowels of this long lost temple, and yes, I was about to get disappointed when that Wizard of Oz ‘dream’ idea popped up, but you quickly remedied that with that last line! Bravo! See? Immortality isn’t as cool as they make it out to be, is it?  Great job, but I did spot one tiny niggle: ‘...when a glowing, shimmering pool caught out attention.’ (our) Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! It was a pleasure to read, HAPPY NEW YEAR, and...
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
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