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Greetings Seasoned, John Hawkes!
I'm no expert on poetry, but I thought this was good. The rhyming scheme seemed a little out of synch (syllable wise), but that could be because it's a style of poetry I'm not familiar with.
What caught my eye about this was the subject of smell. I lost most of my sense of smell when I was 18 due to a head injury. I can smell some things, but not very often, and they have to be really strong smells. Over the years I've had people come to my house and say something stinks. I try to keep a clean house, but being single like I am isn't easy, and I appreciate it when somebody mentions this to me.
Sorry, I digress.
You did a good job of going through all the possibilities of where this 'smell from Hell' could be coming from, and the spelling and grammar were great (thank you!).
It's also nice to see that you're sharing your items now! You'll be surprised the feedback you'll get from this site!
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