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Review #4379187
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 "A Rock!" Open in new Window. [13+]
Once again these two characters find themselves in a dramatic situation.
by CAD Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
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Hello, CAD.
This is very different, and I'm using 'different' quite loosely here.
You have this under comedy (I can understand why), but you should also have it under nonsense. Don't get me wrong! I know you were probably just trying to write something/anything, and I think we've all done something like this. Normally I wouldn't review a piece that has this many grammar errors, but I was intrigued by the subject of the rock and why it didn't die. Odd, I know, but like I said, I've even written nonsensical pieces like this myself. The only difference is that I tried to keep the grammar as correct as correct as possible.
Which leads me to the question of why you didn't. The spelling was great, but it's all bunched up into one lone paragraph and the punctuation and grammar are less than satisfactory. Not visually stimulating, if you know what I mean.
Regardless, I'm still going to rate this 3 stars, and that's just for your effort.
Kee ponw ritin gon, CAD, wherever you are, and I hope to see you back here soon!
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