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 | A Danger to Society  [13+] Humor, Comedy, Silliness  |
| (4.5)| Season's greetings, Jules! I though this was pretty good! Whudathunk that one of the most powerful weapons ever developed by mankind would be a soft, snuggly, new fabric?  I like the way you told this, and you've got a good sense of humor (I read you port intro). Unfortunately though, I don't think this Snuzzle stuff is going to dissuade that lunatic from launching any more of his missiles. As little donny j trump would say: sad. Very well written, Jules! The spelling and grammar were excellent, but I did spot one tiny niggle: 'assasisnation' should be 'assassination' Otherwise, nice job! Kind of an odd ending, but a nice job nonetheless! Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your biography set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite authors/books, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PPS-Since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" to get a feel of Writing.Com and introduce yourself to the community!
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