Hello Jay

This is an Angel Review   

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These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Wow I very sad poem. I feel the longing of days past. Of someone who wished life would have been different.

The title fits with this poem. While looking through your port, I was drawn to read this piece. The rhythm moves alone at a nice pace. Each line flows nicely into the next. Good word selection and punctuation.

Great job.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading City Sunshine.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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