Hello Storm Machine

This is an Angel Review   

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I chose this poem to read and review because of the title. I enjoy reading and writing spooky and dark items. The title gave insight to what the poem was about and it lived up to my expectations.

The rhythm of this piece flows at a nice pace. And each line flows nicely into the next line, making it easy to read and understand. The punctuation helps the rhythm. Good word selection.

There is good imagery used here. I could see someone setting up in bed watching a creature destroy his work. I could feel the fear of being woke up at midnight and seeing a creature in my room. Great job.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Midnight.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .