Hello Ben

This is an Angel Review   

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I know a little about Norse myth, so I had to read your poem. Great job on the title because it pulled me in to read about Thor and Loki. The title lives up to my expectations.

I can feel emotions throughout the poem. And great imagery, I could the story play out as I read. The rhythm and flow are nicely done. The word selection and punctuation helps maintain the rhythm. And each line flows nicely into the next.

The first stanza is my favorite, however, I like the poem as a whole. The only part I don't like is where you repeat lines, but I understand that is part of the writing scheme.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Thor and Loki in Jotunheim.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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