Hello Tommy

This is an Angel Review   

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

After browsing through your port, I chose this poem because of the title. It spoke to me. I love roses and fall.

This poem has a good flow and rhythm, making it easy to understand. Each line flows nicely into the next. It has a good word selection and imagery. I could see the roses falling to ground and people walking on them. It made me sad.

burst from their
delicate buds in
crimson splendor
The poem is great as a whole, however, these are my favorite lines.

Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Fall Roses.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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