Hello Kalesh

This is an Angel Review   

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Catchy title. It caught my attention while looking through your port. The title lives up to expectations of the poem.
It sounds like it was written from the heart. Full of sadness and pain. A longing for someone you can no longer have in your life.

This piece has good rhythm, flow, word selection, and punctuation. Each line merges into the next nicely, making it easy to understand. And it is full of emotions.

Fly on, Oh beloved! on the iron bird
Into the deep sky – now being dyed red of blood
Ride the wind and the lightning bolt
My love as the shield, right through the clouds
These are my favorite lines. There is such imagery used here.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Can't let go.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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