Hello Seo

This is an Angel Review   

Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

A nice poem. Starting with the title, it's a good title, pulling the reader in. I'm not sure if it fits this piece of prose. It didn't live up to my expectations for the poem.

There is good rhythm with each line flowing nicely into the next the line. the punctuation used helps the rhythm along as well. There is good word selection and placement.

Great imagery, I can see the story unfold as I read each line. And I feel happiness and invited into this birds world.
to the place beyond focus
where the sea becomes the sky
And blue blends into blue
I like these lines. I can relate to them. I love setting next to the water and looking out as far as I can.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Beacon.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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