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 |  | something about love  [E] something about love  |
| (4.5)| This is your local Simply Positive Reviewer, here! Your writing has been selected for review, as part of Simply Positive's mission to bring more light on Authors here at WDC! First Impressions: Hi there! Thank you for allowing me to read and review your wonderful poem entitled: "something about love" . I was truly inspired by this work of art, this expressive poetry that rang of a simplistic world, a world filled with feeling, a world of daring...All in all, this poem too was a challenge to the person who the person in the poem was/is speaking to! A kind of narrative of love, of giving, of experiencing... There is an awful lot in this poem, and it required three reads on my part to make sure I soaked in what the author wanted me to know!  Overall Impact: I loved it. What can I say? I can add no more to this one, it had the elements of flight, of fancy, of tender loving love ...and it had the invitation to take flight, with one's heart and one's imagination as well... perfect conditions for a love poem!  Errors: Mmmmmm, maybe NOT an error, because believe it or not, there was a line that COULD have had dual meaning added to it.... it is as follows: " you just have to rime it till she's done..." First, "rime" IS a word, and it is a form of ice that clings to the sides of airplanes that fly at great heights in the right kinds of conditions... But perhaps the author means "rhyme", using a mechanism within their poem?!? Again, not necessarily a goof, but then again, wanting to let the author know of something I saw, and perhaps this needs amending? If not...no worries! Summation: Wow, beautiful work! Me like! Me LOVE! Keep on writing is my thoughts here, for I now have a hunger for more of this kind of thing! Keep on keeping on! Once again, thank you for providing me the opportunity to read and review for Simply Positive; this also has been written in affiliation with
Yours, "Dr.J"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/07/2017 @ 10:31pm EDT