Hi Rick H, I am reviewing your story "The Cave" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ Heather and her niece Cristina were walking up a cliff to grieve over the death of their loved one. When one day they came upon a large crevice full of hidden passages. Unknowingly they uncover some sort of alien creatures hiding, but shortly after it is discovered that this was all a dream, Cristina was asleep or was she?

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short seems to be well written. I have no suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This was an easy to read short story. I enjoyed the emotion that the story contained, the recent loss of the aunts sister and the little girls mother.

My only wish is that the author would have explored that a little more, but I understand why the author could not do so. Thank you so much for writing this short story. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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