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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
I loved this little lesson about destiny. I kept wondering where destiny would come into play and you did not disappoint.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
That fate collided with dreams and desires and brought her to the best option for her.

PLOT~
A girl has a love of music and dreams of becoming a musician, though that isn't in the cards, not for a lack of determination and trying. Suddenly one dance class changes her life and outlook. Not only does she love it, but she excels at it. Right out of high school she gets accepted into a prestigious dance school and then gets the lead role. What follows is sad, but uplifting as well.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
Good descriptions of how her love of music sent her from one musical avenue to the next. It was easy to follow along and I enjoyed the passion of your main character. Even with the little digs at her mother, it wasn't enough to detour her from doing something she loved.

DIALOG~
There is only one line of dialog in this story, but what a powerful one it is. So many times we get wrapped up in our dreams trying to make them happen, but then fate steps in and shows us a new path and we are lucky enough to have the best of both worlds.

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