Hello, Cadie here reviewing on behalf of "Game of Thrones"  I hope that you are enjoying your time here on Writing.com (WDC) this is a really great place to share what you've got.

Overall Impressions~
This poem is short and dark. I understand where you are coming from in that I've been Alone in the Silence and have a poem named for that. This poem is simple.
I wonder why you are walking along the lonely road. Do you feel alone where you are? Why are you walking in darkness and despair?
I think you need a bit more detail in this poem simply because the more detail you can have the better the poem will be. Maybe explain why you are going along alone. Explain where you are going, what's going on around you and how you are going to get out of where you are. Are you going to stay where you are?
If you are talking about being a writer, as a lonely road, that most of us can probably understand. I know I do. Writing though is my outlet in my life. There are times in our lives that we have to be alone, that's okay. It's what you do while you are alone that makes or break you.
This is a good poem, I think it needs a bit more information.

Thank you for sharing, Keep writing.


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