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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
Whoa, this is an incredibly intense story. I ached for Annie from the beginning and to the last word of the story.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
Great descriptions. It was a gripping piece as I read trying to figure out what Annie was so terrified of.

PLOT~
A detective is trying to get answers from Annie, but all she can do is cry. Her father argues with the detective, doing his best to get them out of the house, while Annie is at a loss for words. Her father explains that she saw nothing of her attacker, but Detective Roche can tell she knows something she isn't saying.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
Annie keeps memorizing the numbers but cannot get them all in her mind before her father snatches the card away. She is at the mercy of her twisted father and nowhere to turn. Detective Roche is doing his best to help, a little pushy but that comes with his job.

Easy to see the scene play out as Annie is questioned and her father continually interjects after every question they have. Once they leave the house, Annie is a sitting duck, waiting for her father's wrath to really claim her life. He blames her for her mother's death and believes the wrong woman was taken from him. What a nice guy.

DIALOG~
Great dialog that kept this story intense as the Detective and Annie's father went back and forth, neither man ready to give in.


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