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 An EX-ceptional Evening Open in new Window. [E]
Cassie is on a blind date and runs into her EX!
by Purple Holiday Givings Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi T, I am reviewing your story "An EX-ceptional Evening" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story is about Cassandra and her blind date Damien. Cassandra and Damien are on a blind date when in walks her ex Adam and his date. Cassandra was left brokenhearted by Adam previously and the last thing that she wants to do is to be in close proximity with Adam again. Damien begins to doubt that Cassandra is over Adam because of her reaction to him as he enters the restaurant, but its not that Casandra is interested in Adam its that he broke her heart and she really does not know if she can be in the same room with him, humiliation is a bitter pill to swallow! But Damien suggests a great a idea to Casandra, don't let the ex know whether or not he affects her, the best revenge, and before long Casandra and Adam are back to enjoying their evening even when Adam says hello to Casandra.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I did not notice anything amiss.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: Your spelling and grammar are up to par.

♥ Overall: This was a very good short story about moving forward, releasing and letting go.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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