Hi HuntersMoon, I am reviewing your poem "Cam Queen" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ Oh, very nice! And delicious. This poem is about a woman, but not just any woman a cam girl. This poem provides readers with a glimpse into world of a video girl. We get to see the connection between her and the man or woman beyond the computer even its only just for a minute and that was a lovely visual. I loved the ending the release and then the dressing, and the screen fading to black because after all this was just a job.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I noticed one specific thing that gave me pause. It was a spelling of a word.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: This word: whate'er gave me pause because I am not sure if that spelling is needed. It kinda detracted from the story for me to be completely honest, but other than that everything else seems to be well written.

♥ Overall: This was a sexy poem as it should be, you provided a wonderful visual thank you for writing such a lovely and sexy poem.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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