Hi jmc123654, I am reviewing your story "The True Final Frontier" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story tells the story of a man who pulls over onto the side of the road on his way to Florida to listen to an old story teller tell a tale of passion and love.

The story teller believes that the final frontier is the human heart and he compares his findings to that final frontier in space believed by scientists and the like.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: Your short seems to be well written. I have nothing to suggest to you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common spelling or grammar errors.

♥ Overall: This was a nice short story. I loved how the author compared the galaxies, comets and eclipses to that of the passion that man shares with one another. I enjoyed this short immensely and I look forward to reading more from this author. Thank you so much for writing this short.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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