Hey ~Lisa Noe~kittylove~, I am reviewing your poem "I Saw Heaven" on behalf of games of thrones here on WDC.

Rhythm/Rhyme: I enjoyed your free verse poem. I enjoyed your flow. This poem is about a woman and her death. In the beginning the woman isn't ready to die, but as she sees the angel and it tells her to not be afraid. The woman is so enchanted with the angel that she forgets to be afraid. As the woman is on her journey it is then discovered that it is actually not her time, and that she actually could not stay, that she was destined for other things.

Imagery: The writer evoked a strong sense of beauty, heaven, and light. I enjoyed the imagery that the peom contained


Impressions: This was a very nice poem about sometimes in life God has other plans. What you may think is the end, may just not be the end after all.

This review was written freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely.


Note: I am writing on my iPad and my spelling may be slightly off, please excuse any typos

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