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Rated: E | (5.0)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
What a very sweet story about a little girl who has lost her smile and laughter, all due to a troll who cast a spell and took them away from her.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
That the shoes were willing to help the bunny restore the light back to the little girl in the castle.

PLOT~
A bunny watches a pair of shoes dancing and decides it might help her friend in the castle smile and laugh again. She decides to wait until the shoes are close enough to capture and then she makes her move. The shoes protest and ask why the bunny has trapped them. Once the bunny explains about the little girl and the spell the troll put upon her, they agree to help. The butler doesn't want to let the guests in, but the little girl's mother thinks it's worth a shot. The girl is reluctant at first, but the dancing shoes and the bunny work together to make her smile.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
The bunny is determined to see her friend smile and goes to great lengths to make that happen. The beautiful dancing shoes are willing to help. The sad little girl who is under a spell.

Really good descriptions of the shoes, the bunny, and the sad little girl. It was easy to picture the scene when the shoes slipped onto the bunny's feet and began dancing around the room.

DIALOG~
I liked the added humor when the shoes called the bunny fat. And how persistent the bunny was to get to her friend in need.


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