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Review of Unraveling Time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
It seems no matter what species one might be, time can be a friend or a foe. Just like the choices of dark and light. This was a really good read.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
Great explanations in this piece about Mankind fighting against the wheel of time.

PLOT~
From man's imaginations comes the invention of Time. Everyone thought time would run out eventually, and if it did, then Mankind would cease to exist as well. Time had an enemy in entropy. Man couldn't let disorder take over, so they went on a search to try and understand Time itself, discovering that dark energy powered time. Now the debate began between darkness and light, akin to good versus evil. Those who feared dark called it evil, unable to see that everything contained a clear balance of darkness and light, good and evil.

~DESCRIPTION~
This was an absorbing piece. From the very first paragraph, you pulled me right into this intriguing story. You explained everything in a clear manner so that your reader could grasp the concept of Man and Time, good and evil, darkness and light and how all of these combined led to the realizations that the destruction of darkness, themselves and Time. I know this is from a book you've written. Cutting this down with little tidbits of information would make an excellent back cover book blurb.

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