Hi Selardore, I am reviewing your story "Lucky Me" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ I can honestly say the title of this short story is deceiving! I thought that I was about to immerse myself in a funny little short, boy was I wrong.

This short is about a physically challenged stable boy. Who thinks that he could've had it rough in a lot of ways. The boy has seen a lot of terrible things happen in his life so he is not ignorant of what mister Slate is doing to his mama' so he rectifies the situation.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short story is well written. I have no suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common spelling or grammar errors.

♥ Overall: This short stories title totally threw me, I was expecting something happy and ended with something intense and dramatic.

I loved reading this short, and I was secretly hoping for more. This short is definitely a gem. Thank you so much for writing such a good short story.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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